tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3406832021876162424.post7265055629665314692..comments2015-05-21T12:57:36.661+00:00Comments on Also, I can kill you with my brain: First ChapterIainhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11510552528067975098noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3406832021876162424.post-76589532869235385272009-05-16T18:14:00.000+00:002009-05-16T18:14:00.000+00:00I'd love to see the revised version. This story st...I'd love to see the revised version. This story stuck with me.Uncommon Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12422404350314870201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3406832021876162424.post-38236582789058533372009-05-16T15:45:00.000+00:002009-05-16T15:45:00.000+00:00Thanks. Been rewriting it - taking quite a few of...Thanks. Been rewriting it - taking quite a few of your comments into consideration. The ending is considerably different to how it used to be.Iainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11510552528067975098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3406832021876162424.post-52990353193479977612009-05-16T15:18:00.000+00:002009-05-16T15:18:00.000+00:00I remember this story. I am so glad you are still ...I remember this story. I am so glad you are still working with it.Uncommon Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12422404350314870201noreply@blogger.com